M-ride
T-?, art
W-?, dance/silks
T-co-op
F/S/S-playdates,Sim,nan,library,rest,etc.
My Narcissist
My narcissist tells me he loves me but refuses to ever commit
He forbids me from having any friendships but his female friends list is lit
My narcissist comments on women but tells me that im such a cheat
His put downs are just a mere joke though yet my words are always a deceit
My narcissist gets angered easily but when he hits me it’s always my fault
He tells me I need to calm down more as he breaks through the lock on my door
My narcissist goes on forever but never has time just to listen
He twists all my words round against me, to make sure he wins in his true mission
My narcissist thinks that he’s perfect, there’s nothing he ever does wrong
He acts like a child in a tantrum, then wonders why he never belongs
My narcissist crys, begs and borrows and sucks me back into his lies
He acts just like jeckyl and hyde did, while i drown in his green monster eyes
My narcissist wants it all his way but puts everyone else lucky last
He drags up my every mistake but refuses to look at his past
My narcissist says that I’m clingy while calling my phone 50 times
He leaves me abusive voice messages and will never confess to his crimes
My narcissist spits in my face and kicks dents in the side of my car
He lights fires at my front doorway but always tells me I take things too far
My narcissist borrows my money then forgets when it’s time to repay
He complains about all his misfortunes yet forgets to ask if I’m ok
My narcissist gets so damn jealous of the men I don’t dare to look towards
He thinks that my phone’s hiding numbers of all the secret romances i hoard
My narcissist likes to play make believe, as if he’s peter pan and I’m Tink
He says lifes his Neverland nightmare and his Wendy is a bottle of drink
My narcissist tells me to smile more, it’s only him that can be sad
He pokes and he prods and he baits me, but i don’t dare to show him im mad
My narcissists life is the hardest, according to him nothing’s worse
He moans like a childish victim, even though it’s all caused by him first
My narcissist threatens to leave me, there’s nothing that I can do right
He doesn’t know I’d be set free then, to live in peace for the rest of my life
The Story all about Animals by Willow
I found a kitten and it grew up and it was a grey cat. I named it Raven. His eyes are like a frozen lake.
The next day I found a dapple grey horse. I named it Cloud and he took me for a ride in the mountains.
The next day I found a brown sheepdog. I named it Chocolate. I took him on a walk and we took pictures of the mountains.
The next day I found a calico guinea pig. I named it Bubble. I gave him a bubble bath and he loved it so much.
The next day I found a pink and black pig. I named him Spot. He loves to eat his food and cuddle with me after he gets clean.
The next day I found a rabbit. I named him Caramel. He loves to hop and also cuddle with me. He is soft and fluffy.
The next day I found a white tiger. I named him Stripe. He loves to eat meat. He likes to come inside and we eat dinner together.
The next day I found a Panda. I named it Patch. She loves me and she loves to eat bamboo but she only eats when i watch her eat.
The next day I found a Chimpanzee. I named it Chimpy. He loves to hang on the trees and I hang with him too.
The next day I found a Leopard. I named it April. She can jump high and run fast. She rounds up the chickens for me.
These are my chickens. They are very funny and they chase you with the Turkey, whose name is Carol Baskin.
Brooklyn and the Unicorns
DRAFT
Brooklyn is the oldest daughter of the family and is 10. Willow is the youngest daughter, she is 7. Their mum Amy, is 40. The wind unicorn Pipa is kind and can grow wings. She runs on rainbows and cloud bridges. She can make tornatos and jumps out of clouds. Jenger the fire unicorn is brave and fast and loves to run and jump. She can make rings of fire that she jumps through and praforms for people. The rock unicorn Ace, is a black and white appalosia. He is strong and jentel and can make mountains and create rveans . The earth unicorn Sparrow, is a beutyfull brown and white pinto. He can grow plants by stomping his hoof on the grownd. He can grow vines and other things. These unicorns have many diffrent powers and they are all so unec. Grazelda is a old witch who hates the magic in the forest and wants to turn it into her evil swamp. Her serpents Zek and Rek can shape shift and fly in the air by shaking their body.
One day the two sisters, Brooklyn and Willow go out in to the woods. They stumble upon a old book about unicorns and their magic. Join the girls on their magical adventure and help them defeat the evil witch Grizelda and her serpents.
Chapter One
Willow awoke to the sound of her sister telling her to wake up. “Ok,” Willow said. Brooklyn smelt the air. “Do you smell that?” she asked her sister. “Yes,” Willow replyed. “Mum’s making cookies!” the two girls shouted. Willow jumped out of bed and ran in to the kitchin with Brooklyn where they saw their mum pulling the cookies out. “Oh girls, good morning,” said their mum. “Good morning,” the two replyed. Both grabbed a cookie and with a full mouth Willow strugeld to say, “This is delicious.” “Hey! Chew first!” mum exsclamed. Brooklyn laghed. “Hey dont laugh at me,” said Willow. “Oh you two,” chuceld mum. Wouns they finished their breakfast, they went outside. When they went outside, they fed the chickens, wild birds, pigs, sheep, goats, dogs, cats, horses, cows, and other animals.
Great story idea. I love how you introduced the characters first and invited the reader on an adventure, then started chapter one. Could you add some more to this story? Continue working on your spelling. Excellent punctuation. Watch your use of a instead of an.
FINAL COPY
Brooklyn is the oldest daughter of the family and is 10. Willow is the youngest daughter and is 7. Their mum Amy, is 40. The wind unicorn Pipa is kind and can grow wings. She runs on rainbows and cloud bridges. She can make tornadoes and jumps out of clouds. Jenger the fire unicorn is brave and fast and loves to run and jump. She can make rings of fire that she jumps through and performs for people. The rock unicorn Ace, is a black and white appaloosa. He is strong and gentle and can make mountains and create ravines. The earth unicorn Sparrow, is a beautiful brown and white pinto. He can grow plants by stomping his hoof on the ground. He can grow vines and other things. These unicorns have many different powers and they are all so unique. Grizelda is a old witch who hates the magic in the forest and wants to turn it into her evil swamp. Her serpents Zek and Rek can shape shift and fly in the air by shaking their body.
One day the two sisters, Brooklyn and Willow go out in to the woods. They stumble upon an old book about unicorns and their magic. Join the girls on their magical adventure and help them defeat the evil witch Grizelda and her serpents.
Chapter One
Willow awoke to the sound of her sister telling her to wake up. “Ok,” Willow said. Brooklyn smelt the air. “Do you smell that?” she asked her sister. “Yes,” Willow replied. “Mum’s making cookies!” the two girls shouted. Willow jumped out of bed and ran in to the kitchen with Brooklyn where they saw their mum pulling the cookies out. “Oh girls, good morning,” said their mum. “Good morning,” the two replied. Both grabbed a cookie and with a full mouth, Willow struggled to say, “This is delicious.” “Hey! Chew first!” mum exclaimed. Brooklyn laughed. “Hey don’t laugh at me,” said Willow. “Oh you two,” chuckled mum. Once they finished their breakfast, they went outside. When they went outside, they fed the chickens, wild birds, pigs, sheep, goats, dogs, cats, horses, cows, and other animals. They went back to the house to get dressed to go on a trail ride. They tacked up their horses and set off into the bush. Soon they saw a big tree to climb so they got off their horses and tied them up. Then they started climbing up to the top of the tree. They could see everything from up there. Then they heard a horse in distress but it wasn’t theirs.
Wow this sounds very intriguing. Can’t wait to read more. Excellent story!
The Penguin Sleepover
DRAFT
Ping Ping is a little penguin. She loves frolicking about with her friends and sliding down icy mowntins on her belly, then splashing back into the water. She loves living in Antarctica. Lolo is Ping Pings best friend. One day Ping Ping, Lolo and some of there other friends were playing, when suddenly Ping Ping had a greate idea. What if they all had a sleepover at her house? They all agreed and went to ask the parent’s. “Can my friend’s please sleep over? Please?” said Ping Ping. “Of course,” Ping Ping’s mum said. They all jumped in exitement. That night they began to bild there cubby. They started to collect blanket’s to hang up, peg’s to clip it up, fairy lights to light it up and lastly some blanket’s and pillow’s.
Excellent story. Keep working on yourok spelling. Well done remembering your punctuation. Id love to hear more about what happens with Ping Ping and her friends.
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Ping Ping is a little penguin. She loves frolicking about with her friends and sliding down icy mountains on her belly, then splashing back into the water. She loves living in Antarctica. Lolo is Ping Pings best friend. One day Ping Ping, Lolo and some of their other friends were playing, when suddenly Ping Ping had a great idea. What if they all had a sleepover at her house? They all agreed and went to ask the parent’s. “Can my friend’s please sleep over? Please?” said Ping Ping. “Of course,” Ping Ping’s mum said. They all jumped in excitement. That night they began to build their cubby. They started to collect blanket’s to hang up, peg’s to clip it up, fairy lights to light it up and lastly some blanket’s and pillow’s. Finally they were done. “It looks amazing! I’m so proud of us!” Lolo exclaimed. “Let’s go get some snacks now,” Ping Ping said. So they all ran to the kitchen to choose.
Great job adding a bit more onto the story. Keep up the good work.
Letter
27/06/22
Dear Chloe,
How have you been? I have been great. Grey cut down the good rope swing and I was sad but it turned out good in the end. He made a normal swing with a board. Me and Willow are doing a Alice in wonder land play it would be great if you could join us just saying. I miss you. I hope we can see each other soon.
Love Brooklyn
12 February 2022
Dear Chloe,
How have you been? I went to horse riding yesterday. It was my last time riding Legend because he is going to a new home. Fun fact, Legend loves the water. He is very slow but his trot is fast. I learnt how to skate board and Willow is learning to skate board a bit. Willow is also learning to rollerblade. I went to dad’s house for Christmas and I got a LED scooter, 2000 bead kit and lots of lollies. What did you get for Christmas? Uncle Blake bought Willow and I some Minecraft Lego. How are your ducks, cats, goats, chickens, bird and dog going? I was really sad when my bird flew away because Avah and Willow left the door open. Hope to hear from you soon. Do you want to be pen pals? I really miss you and I hope I can visit soon.
Love Brooklyn
Willows Animal Song😯😆😊🐥🦒🦙🐘🐨🐼🐻🐵🐙🐢🐏🐖🦓🦚🦃🐑
Koalas koalas koalas are the best
Giraffes giraffes giraffes re the best
Llamas llamas llamas are the best
Elephants elephants elephants are the best
Sheep sheep sheep are the best
Monkeys monkeys monkeys are the best
Chickens chickens chickens are the best
Pandas pandas panders are the best
Bears bears bears are the best
Pigs pigs pigs are the best
Lost Girl
Once there was a girl
The most loving in the world
But every boy she ever loved just broke her heart
So she hid herself away
Turned her heart from red to grey
So no one else could ever break her soul apart
But behind her blue grey eyes
Everything was just a lie
Because she knew her fairy tale couldn’t die
So she put her armour on
And began to sing her song
So maybe someday her lost boy could find his way
She’s a lonely little lost girl
The sweetest in the whole world
But so far no one else could see her worth
So she waited for the day
When her lost boy would finally stay
And together theyd be found and rule the world
After 3 long painful years
Through the blood stains, sweat and tears
He appeared right out of nowhere like a dream
Swept her right up off her feet
Filled her cold heart up with heat
And together they became the perfect team
Destiny
He decided that love was hopeless
He’d grown so used to the cold
And those who swam in the shallows
Were still drowning innocent souls
But she heard his one true heart song
Through the layers of endless pain
Disguised as strength and sacrifice
For a world that was ugly and vain
He could only rely on himself then
So he pushed the world further away
Real love seemed like a daydream
Yet something kept calling his name
Begging for him to return home
Over and over it beckoned
He stood on the threshold of war
But his heart saved him at the last second
A long lost tragic love song
Which turned into triumph once more
Two long lost soul mates united
Battered and bruised to the core
Searching for someone to heal them
Their brokenness suddenly whole
Towering walls began crumbling
As their love crossed the earth soul to soul
They chose to stay strong and fight hard
Their hearts were 2 warriors brave
The only ones worthy enough though
To stand side by side every day
In this battle of love against ego
Only the universe sees
If together someday they’ll find victory
Two hearts holding onto a dream
bluegrayeyes 